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    How would you help your colleagues

    Hello,

    Can help me check if there's grammar error in the sentences below.


    Q. How would you help your colleagues?
    A. I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example -- if I kept a positive attitude and stayed excited about my own job. When they see how enthusiastic I am they will have a tendency to become excited as well.


    Many thanks.

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    Re: How would you help your colleagues

    Quote Originally Posted by Ferdie11 View Post
    Hello,

    Can help me check if there's grammar error in the sentences below.


    Q. How would you help your colleagues?
    A. I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example. If I kept a positive attitude and stayed excited about my own job, they would see how enthusiastic I am and have a tendency to become excited as well.


    Many thanks.
    Bhai.

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    Re: How would you help your colleagues

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    Bhai.
    Thanks so much, Bhai. What about this one?

    I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example – I would keep a positive attitude and stay excited about my own job. When they see how enthusiastic I am they will have a tendency to become excited as well.

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    Re: How would you help your colleagues

    Quote Originally Posted by Ferdie11 View Post
    Thanks so much, Bhai. What about this one?

    I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example – I would keep a positive attitude and stay excited about my own job. When they see how enthusiastic I am, they will have a tendency to become excited as well.
    If the dependent clause comes before the main clause, it must be followed by a comma.

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