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    Default No one respond me still,Please check my informal letter

    It's third time,but no one respond me still,Please check my informal letter as much as you can

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    Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stay with some friends. They have just send you some photos of your holiday.
    Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
    - Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
    - Explain why you didn't write earlier
    - Invite them to come and stay with you.
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    Dear Bob,

    I am writing this letter to appreciate your amazing photos and all that you did for me in last holiday.

    First of all, sorry for my delay. I had to write this letter 10 days ago. I was so busy and didnít have any time for it. I had to prepare myself for an exam. It was very difficult for me and I was studying 16 hours a day. Finally, I took the exam yesterday. Thereupon, I could check your letter and saw your photos. Those were wonderful and made me so happy. I didn't think you could do this. It will be a great memorial for me. Every time I see these photos, I will remember you and our friends.

    Well, I would like to invite you and other friends to my house in Paris next summer. I have a little surprise for you. Please let me know when you could
    come here.


    All the best,
    John.

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    Default Re: No one respond me still,Please check my informal letter

    Not a teacher

    this n' that
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    This is the third time I've posted,but no one has responded yet - please check my informal letter. Thank You.
    Topic :
    Last month you had a holiday overseas, where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
    Write a letter to your friends, and in your letter:
    - Thank them for the photos and for the accomodations.
    - Explain why you didn't write earlier.
    - Invite them to come and stay with you.
    *************************************************
    Dear Bob,


    I am writing this letter to thank you for your amazing photos, and everything that you did for me during my holiday.
    First of all, sorry for my delay - (I had to write this letter 10 days ago.?) I was very busy and didn’t have any spare time. I had to prepare for an exam. It was very difficult for me, and I studied 16 hours a day. I took the exam yesterday. Then I had time to read your letter and see your photos. They were wonderful and made me very happy. (I didn't think you could do this.?) It will be a great memory (a memorial is a funeral service!) for me. Every time I see these photos, I will remember you and our friends, and the good times we had.
    Well, I would like to invite you to my house in Paris next summer. I have a little surprise for you. Please let me know when you can
    come.

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    akm2446 is offline Newbie
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    Default Thanks JTRiff

    Thanks a lot for your notice, It was very helpful for me.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Default Re: Thanks JTRiff

    There are no guarantees that people will correct your writing. People come in post as they want- with writing some gets done and some doesn't. If you want a proofreading service, there are many professional sites where you can pay to get things proofread.

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