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    #1

    Please correct this (1).

    'I incerted a coin in the juice machine, pressed the button of cola,
    heard a clink-clank sound, and took a can of cola from the bottom of the juice machine.'

    If there is any problem, let me know. Thank you.


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    #2

    Re: Please correct this (1).

    'I inserted a coin in the soft drink machine; pressed the "cola" button;
    heard a clink-clank sound and then took a can of cola from the bottom of the machine.'

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