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    So our India’s Prime Minister has said in Afghanistan that ‘India is not America’. What does that mean?
    Let’s try to decipher the true meaning. American commandos stormed the Laden’s hideout in Pakistan and killed him. But, when it’s come to India’s most wanted criminals - who are hiding in Pakistan have no immediate danger to their life from India. Because all are commandos in India are busy protecting politicians, who themselves are wanted in innumerable cases. Indeed our politicians are busy making strategists – how to accumulate as much money as they can & how to safely park it in Swiss bank. Next to Osama, the biggest terrorist Kasab is having a great life in Indian Jail. We assure you that you are indeed more safe in India than in any other country.

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    Default Re: Please check the grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    So our India’s Prime Minister has said in Afghanistan that ‘India is not America’. What does that mean?
    Let’s try to decipher the true meaning. American commandos stormed the Laden’s hideout in Pakistan and killed him. But, when it’s come to India’s most wanted criminals - who are hiding in Pakistan have no immediate danger to their life from India. Because all are commandos in India are busy protecting politicians, who themselves are wanted in innumerable cases. Indeed our politicians are busy making strategists – how to accumulate as much money as they can & how to safely park it in Swiss bank. Next to Osama, the biggest terrorist Kasab is having a great life in Indian Jail. We assure you that you are indeed more safe in India than in any other country.


    NOT A TEACHER


    (1) First, I have just read in London's Guardian newspaper (online) that

    print newspapers are doing very well in India. Congratulations!!! Here in

    the States, our print newspapers (with a few exceptions) are dying.

    (2) Now to the grammar (of course, NOT to the content) of

    your paragraph:


    The Indian prime minister has said in Afghanistan that "India is

    not America." What does that mean? Let's try to decipher its

    actual meaning. American commandos stormed bin Laden's

    hideout in Pakistan and killed him. But India's most-wanted

    criminals who are hiding in Pakistan have no reason to fear

    that India will storm their hideouts, for our commandos are

    much too busy protecting Indian politicians, many of whom

    have been implicated in cases of corruption and are seeking

    ways to stash their ill-gotten gains in Swiss banks. Kasab, the

    biggest terrorist after bin Laden, is enjoying a great life in a

    Indian prison. It appears that corrupt politicians and terrorists

    find India a very safe country.

    (3) I suspect that this thread will be moved to the writing

    forum since "Ask a Teacher" specializes in points of grammar.

    Respectfully yours,


    James

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