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When I first become aware of the field of digital media it was a new science in my country. I chose to pursue (in) digital media because I wantED to be on the forefront of discovery, and I recognized that it would become a vital factor in the lives of human beings. Despite the newness of the field, programming and design came naturally to me. As my knowledge and experience grew, I began to explore the greater potential in the convergence of different fields of science.
My fascination with the interaction between human beings and technology was fueled (in) by reading about a robot. It had been crafted to look lifelike and was able to express feeling through facial expressions.
This combination of sciences opened up new windows of possibility for me and motivated me to look at your project with more interest. I thought that in future I could go further, and research memorization in robots as a sideline.
My decision (comes from) is based on two reasons. First, this master program is extremely suitable (with) to my ability, my interest, my bachelor program, and the extra courses that I took after graduation. The second reason for my choice originates from the well-known reputation of the highLY qualified educationAL system of Germany. Having a chance to study in Germany means I will have opportunities to approach and experience one of the best educational systems in the world.
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