Results 1 to 4 of 4
  1. #1
    new2grammar's Avatar
    new2grammar is offline Senior Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Punjabi
      • Home Country:
      • India
      • Current Location:
      • India
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Posts
    880
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default please check for the grammar

    In current scenario when property rates are sky-rocketing & home loans are getting dearer, most of the people think that buying home will be just a dream for them, which cannot be transformed into reality. But, we at Rashmi Housing Pvt. Ltd. have always strived that nothing should come in between your dream. Rashmi Housing Pvt. Ltd. Is pioneer in building ultra low cost houses, and helping to fulfill billions dream of owning their sweet homes in Mumbai city. Since last one decade we have handed over 10 thousand flats key to their proud owners.
    Any foundation will be strong only if its base is strong, we truly understand this, thatís why we have always made sure that we deliver each customer full value of their money. Our strength is peopleís trust in us thatís why we growing stronger day by day. Donít merely go on what we are talking, see all the projects we have completed till date (please visit Rashmi Group) because seeing is believing, isnít it?

  2. #2
    new2grammar's Avatar
    new2grammar is offline Senior Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Punjabi
      • Home Country:
      • India
      • Current Location:
      • India
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Posts
    880
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: please check for the grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Gillnetter View Post
    Here are some suggested changes. I took a look at the website noted above and it needs some serious editing.
    just a continuity

    Who do not want to buy a home in Mumbai? Buying a home as an investment for future or just as a second home or you may be a first time buyer, who wants to own your sweet home. Rashmi housing is determined to make your dreams a reality and that too at an affordable price. At if you think that affordability always come with a compromise then you are wrong.

  3. #3
    NHGK is offline Newbie
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • American English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States
    Join Date
    Jan 2012
    Posts
    1
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: please check for the grammar

    Why is there no hyphen in the phrase, "ultra low cost"?

    Thanks.

  4. #4
    tedtmc is offline Key Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Interested in Language
      • Native Language:
      • Chinese
      • Home Country:
      • Malaysia
      • Current Location:
      • Malaysia
    Join Date
    Jun 2006
    Posts
    2,130
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: please check for the grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    just a continuity continuation

    Who does not want to buy a home in Mumbai? Buying a home as an investment for the future or just as a second home or you may be a first-time buyer (no comma)who wants to own your sweet home(sentence not complete). Rashmi housing is determined to make your dreams a reality and that too at an affordable price. AtAnd if you think that affordability always come with a compromise then you are wrong.
    not a teacher

Similar Threads

  1. [Essay] please help me check the grammar
    By luke_yth in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 23-Sep-2009, 23:21
  2. [Grammar] Hello! I need some grammar check
    By halfknot in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 13
    Last Post: 26-Aug-2009, 06:19
  3. please help me to check the grammar.
    By ccone in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 23-Jul-2008, 12:10
  4. please check my grammar
    By bbmak in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 04-Aug-2006, 11:58

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •