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    Default Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

    decided to remove my statement
    Last edited by rxgirl; 09-Sep-2005 at 20:11.

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    Default Re: Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

    I am not a great fan of direct questions in writing like this:
    Why do I want to be a pharmacist?

    They ask you the question, so we already know what the writing is going to be about.

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    Default Re: Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

    i agree. i dont like these type of essay questions either.did you have any suggestions on how to make it better?

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