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    #1

    Please rephrase it..

    It is now possible to own a home in Mumbai without the burden of loan, without a long-term commitment and cream of the cake is - without any interest!

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    #2

    Re: Please rephrase it..

    Here is one suggestion:

    It is now possible to own a home in Mumbai without the burden of a loan, without a long-term commitment, and - here's the icing on cream of the cake is - without any interest!

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    #3

    Re: Please rephrase it..

    Or "and -- to top it all off -- without..."

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    #4

    Re: Please rephrase it..

    Mind you, it's a dubious sentence in terms of content.

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