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You will find you are more likely to get help when you ask for it, perhaps with a please and thank you, instead of barking orders to us in all capital letters. I don't respond to those "requests" for help and I'm sure others won't either.
The paragraph seems very straight-forward. Can you highlight the areas that are confusing you?
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.