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    REPHRASE THIS PARAGRAPH
    Primary health care is the foundation of the health care system. It is the first point of contact people have with the health care system. It could be through a doctor, a nurse, another health professional, or perhaps through phone or computer-based services.

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    Hello sunny,
    Welcome to Using English.

    You will find you are more likely to get help when you ask for it, perhaps with a please and thank you, instead of barking orders to us in all capital letters. I don't respond to those "requests" for help and I'm sure others won't either.

    The paragraph seems very straight-forward. Can you highlight the areas that are confusing you?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    It's also your homework, which we won't do for you.

    Apart from that, welcome to the forum.

    Rover

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    hi barb_d sry i didnt notice that, I should have said please and thank you. when I look at it yes it does seem like am ordering the question, my mistake. and yea it's my first time using a forum so I was a bit lost as to how things work.. well anyways about the paragraph I already understood a friend of my mine explained it to me.
    thanks for asking even though I didnt ask the question properly.


    thank you

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    We look forward to your future posts.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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