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    Default revising sentences

    if the children had been enchanted by Mr. Wright stories before, they would be even more enthralled by his new tale of a fantasy kingdom.

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    Default Re: revising sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by hello05 View Post
    iIf the children had been enchanted by Mr. Wright's stories before, they would be even more enthralled by his new tale of a fantasy kingdom.
    It's fine now, so long as you are suggesting that they had not been delighted before.

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