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    what's wrong with this sentences

    hi, got your mail but i'm not sure if it's complete or cut. the message below is the entire mail that i have received from you.

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    Re: what's wrong with this sentences

    Welcome.

    Try,

    Hi,

    I got your e-mail but I'm not sure (if) I got it in its entirety/in its complete form. This is what I received:

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    Re: what's wrong with this sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Casiopea
    Welcome.

    Try,

    Hi,

    I got your e-mail but I'm not sure (if) I got it in its entirety/in its complete form. This is what I received:
    Doesn't in its entirety" sound a little out-of-place with "Hi"? Seems to mix register a little to abruptly.

    How about:

    Hi,

    (I) got your mail, but I'm not sure if it's complete. This is what I received:

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    Re: what's wrong with this sentences

    Knowledge is power.
    Give 'em what you know; let 'em decide what's best. ;)

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    Re: what's wrong with this sentences

    thanks for helping me with this one. any other suggestion?
    Last edited by smiley; 11-Sep-2005 at 13:14.

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    Re: what's wrong with this sentences

    What about?

    I got your e-mail but I'm not sure I got the whole thing. Here's what I got:

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    Re: what's wrong with this sentences

    hi. i have another question. how will i reply to this message, "i hope its alright to ask who the person behind mysteryman is", if i prefer to remain anonymous? if my purpose is just to help them with their love relationship. thanks.

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    Re: what's wrong with this sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Casiopea
    Knowledge is power.
    Give 'em what you know; let 'em decide what's best. ;)
    Oh no, please, Casi., teach them how to use different registers first and then set them free.

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    Re: what's wrong with this sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Casiopea
    What about?

    I got your e-mail but I'm not sure I got the whole thing. Here's what I got:
    You've got "got" fever.

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