chowbarry
Junior Member
- Joined
- Apr 17, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Could anybody here help me improve the following sentences?
1) As scheduled, I paid a visit to the ABC park yesterday noon, I found a ceremony celebrating the opening of Councillor office was held at the heart of the playground. Nearly 300 people coming from different parties took part in the ceremony, but all of them aboded by the instructions. General speaking, the ceremony was held in order as no adverse report was received so far.
2) I received a phone call from Mr. A this morning and I learnt that the Supplies Department is set to start the construction work early next week.
Thank you in advance!
1) As scheduled, I paid a visit to the ABC park yesterday noon, I found a ceremony celebrating the opening of Councillor office was held at the heart of the playground. Nearly 300 people coming from different parties took part in the ceremony, but all of them aboded by the instructions. General speaking, the ceremony was held in order as no adverse report was received so far.
2) I received a phone call from Mr. A this morning and I learnt that the Supplies Department is set to start the construction work early next week.
Thank you in advance!