A few changes.Please help me improve the following sentences?
1) Concerning the project of repairing the male toilet at ABC park, I phoned
toMr. A, the coordinator of Supplies Department's contractor, yesterday. Mr. A revealed (OR indicated) that the repair ingwork is currently all but completed, only awaiting the completion of replacingthe replacement of several wash basins. Mr. A added that if they are permitted to close the male toilet for two days, the whole repairing work can be completed within three days time s, one week earlier than the first estimate d.
2) Two workers from TVD cleansing company went to ABC park yesterday morning and carried out the third anti-mosquito operation. (The remaining two operations will be held on 12.07.2011 and 29.07.2011) The operation was successfully finished at noon and no adverse report
havehas been reportedreceived up to now. Please see the below pictures for your reference. Thank you for your attention!
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