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    chowbarry is offline Junior Member
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    Default Could you help me proofread the following sentences?

    Could you help me proofread the following sentences?

    1) With reference to the conversation with your Mr. B, the supervisor of the Supplies Department, this morning, I understood that despite urging the Supplies Department to foster the commence of the construction work at ABC stadium under several circumstances, it appears that the Supplies Department is still yet to have a concrete blueprint of the construction work.

    2) Water supply has always been the major managerial problem at TWD playground for years. The absence of a water tape badly affects our daily management ranging from plants watering to facilitates cleansing and arouses the public criticism. As such, I suggest to ask the Building Department for studying the installation of a water tape at the playground in the near future.

    3) Our understanding is that the construction work has started since May 2011, but there is still no sign of having its completed at the end of this month, which was officially stated by your contractor prior to the commencement of the construction work. I wonder if there is any wrong with the construction work?

    Many thanks in advance!

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    Default Re: Could you help me proofread the following sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by chowbarry View Post
    Could you help me proofread the following sentences?

    1) With reference to the conversation with your Mr. B, the supervisor of the Supplies Department, this morning, I understood that despite urging the Supplies Department to foster the commence of begin the construction work at ABC stadium under several circumstances(?), it appears that the Supplies Department is still yet to does not have a concrete blueprint offor the construction work.

    2) Water supply has always been the major managerial problem at TWD playground for years. The absence of a water tape (not familiar with this term) badlyseriously affects our daily management, ranging from plants' watering to facilitates (facilities?) cleansing and arouses the public criticism. As such, I suggest to asking the Building Department forto studying the installation of a water tape at the playground in the near future.

    3) Our understanding is that the construction work has started sincein May 2011, but there is still no signindication of having its it being completed atby the end of this month, which was officially stated by your contractor prior to the commencement of the construction work. I wonder if Is there is any wrongproblem with the construction work?

    Many thanks in advance!
    A few suggestions.

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    Default Re: Could you help me proofread the following sentences?

    billmcd, thank you for your suggestions!

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