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    poor memory, is

    The memory of being hurt in the relationship has been spinning around. Every single word and moment while they were together keep rolling in her mind every second which scratch her deep cut wound to bleed again that she seems never able to get rid of. She knows time is the only remedy to wash the pain. Now, she can only wait for the day to come and heal.

    Any mistake in the writing above?

    __________________________________________________ ____________

    1. Everyone is happy.

    2. Everybody is happy.

    3 . All of them is ..............

    Any mistake in the writing above?

    Ju

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    Re: poor memory, is

    Not a teacher

    In my opinion, your text is over elaborate. Try removing some adornements which are confusing and post it again. I will give you a good start, though:

    "The memory of having been hurt by the relationship still..."

    Look at this:

    Every cat/book/thing (singular)

    So:

    1. Everyone is happy.

    2. Everybody is happy.

    All of the the cats/books/us/them (plural)

    So:

    3 . All of them are happy

    M.


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    Re: poor memory, is

    Quote Originally Posted by Mannysteps View Post
    Not a teacher

    In my opinion, your text is over elaborate. Try removing some adornements which are confusing and post it again. I will give you a good start, though:

    "The memory of having been hurt by the relationship still..."

    Look at this:

    Every cat/book/thing (singular)

    So:

    1. Everyone is happy.

    2. Everybody is happy.

    All of the the cats/books/us/them (plural)

    So:

    3 . All of them are happy

    M.
    Thank you for your comment regarding the writing, however, that the true feelings that's been bothering her in the past 6 month that I couldn't think of another way to describe.

    Sorry about that. Any idea from you again.

    (any mistake in the writing above?)


    Ju

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