We are born into this world without bringing anything with us, and we will leave empty-handed too. We have been repeating the cycle of birth and death countless number of times.
1. Is 'with us' correct?
2. Are there any errors in the sentences?
Last edited by Tan Elaine; 12-Jun-2011 at 20:22. Reason: typo
It is about reincarnation, I believe.
I liked the line as well.
That's fine. I think 'cycles'is possible, though I prefer the singular 'cycle'
I think the simplest would be: We have been repeating the cycle of birth and death countless times.
However, that is a matter of personal taste, not of correctness.
ps. Much of my original doubt was simply my obtuseness - I didn't think of reincarnation.