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    The replacement of the management

    Is this sentence phrased well? Thanks.

    The replacement of the management has resolved none of the acute problems which the company suffers from, nor can it guarantee a better future for the fired workers.

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    Re: The replacement of the management

    Quote Originally Posted by motico View Post
    The replacement of the management has resolved none of the acute problems which the company suffers from, nor can it guarantee a better future for the fired workers.
    It is fine. I would say 'workers who were/have been fired' rather than 'fired workers', but that's just a personal thing.

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    Re: The replacement of the management

    Quote Originally Posted by motico View Post
    Is this sentence phrased well? Thanks.

    The replacement of the management has resolved none of the acute problems from which the company suffers from, nor can it guarantee a better future for the fired workers.
    I don't say this often, but in this case I would prefer "from which". See above.

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