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    Default please correct my english

    Everything's is ok and manageable not until i got pregnant and you did something that made me realize that it wasnt really me, im not the one for you. What you did is nothing but damaging to the relationship and more than hurtful to me.

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    Default Re: please correct my english

    Quote Originally Posted by smiley
    Everything's is ok and manageable not until i got pregnant and you did something that made me realize that it wasnt really me, im not the one for you. What you did is nothing but damaging to the relationship and more than hurtful to me.
    Hi, I want to try and help you, but keep in mind I am also a learner of English just like you are. I would rephrase your sentence like this:

    Everything was ok and manageable until I fell pregnant and you did something which made me realise that it isn't really me, that I am not the one for you. What you did doesn't do anything else than damage the relationship and it is hurtful for me.

    Bye, Jacqueline

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    hi jacqueline, thank you for helping me.

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    Excellent

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    You are welcome smiley. Glad I could help!

    Anything else, just ask.

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