please can you tell me if these sentences are correct. It seems like there are some mistakes I haven't already found. By the way thanks to all of you who read and answer this post.
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It was a slightly cold Friday night on November 25th in my hometown Lincolnshire, England. The stars were sparkling softly from the sky and a painful wind that felt like an icy-cold breath out of devil's mouth was blowing directly to my face. Do you remember such a feeling when you have some kind of foreboding.