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    A tribute to company employee who died in an accident ....

    Hi,

    An employee of a company died in an car accident. After 3 days in a weekly meeting, company manager praised his best qualities and sincerity for about 10 minutes and then general topic was discussed.

    How to write the minutes of this meeting. Are the following sentences okay.

    "The Weekly Meeting was opened by the Manager at Conference Hall at 11:00 am. He paid tribute to Mr.xxxxx, who died in an car accident. He praised his best qualities and dedication."

    Please help.

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    Re: A tribute to company employee who died in an accident ....

    That looks acceptable to me, sweetie.

    Rover

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    #3

    Re: A tribute to company employee who died in an accident ....

    N.A.T.
    My comments
    - your capitalization of words is not correct
    - a car accident
    The rest of your text is well-written.

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    Re: A tribute to company employee who died in an accident ....

    Quote Originally Posted by Michael84 View Post
    N.A.T.
    My comments
    - your capitalization of words is not correct
    - a car accident
    The rest of your text is well-written.
    Thanks a lot to both of you for replying me.

    Best regards.

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