Everybody processes talents and skills to do something in particular or to work in specific areas as sport or music. As a result, we can see many talents involved in these areas: people who were born with great talent, as Mozart and Beethoven for the music, and others that are famous because they received an excellent training.
It is true that for both typologies, a long training is required. But for someone like Mozart and Maradona, they were born with natural talent, so they didn't not need a long tedious training period to succeed in their life ( don't say they don't need training; even a genius needs training to be good at what he's doing. Being talented only speeds up the process)
On the other hand for the other kind of people, not genious but ordinary people, they can be taught to become a good sports person or musician, but good results can be obtained only through a good an long training. Nowadays areas as music and sport are full of ordinary but good sports person or musician. We can think about the million of music bands that there are all around the world, and they have a great success and even they are well-known, but this point does not concern that they are genious and they were born with this talent, it is only due to for their long and good training.
On the other hand, people who are not blessed with natural talent can still become successful sports person or musician through hard work. Many of their successes come from long hours of tedious trainings and preparations. As we look at all the famous musicians and sportsmen today, regardless of them being talented or not, they have reached to what they are today through the means of hard work.
To sum everything up, I think that everyone can become successful in all aspects of life. Having natural talent can significantly speed up the process, but only through hard work, will a person be able to succeed in life.
Ok, I am going to be blunt here: you are not going to get very far with this type of writing.
1. spelling: you need to proof read carefully and avoid spelling mistake. IELTS tests your English proficiency. How proficiency are you if you can't even spell?
2. awkward and unclear sentences: I had to rewrite your 3rd paragraph because I have to no idea what you wanted to say. You should try reading your essay out loud; it is a good way to eliminate many awkward and unclear sentences
3. grammar: review sentence structure, tenses.
You will need a lot of work before you are already for your test.
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