hello,my name is sara,i live in Lebanon with my family in a big house,i have 2 brothers and 2 sisters.i study busneiss in saint joseph university in lebanon.i like to go shopping and watch tv specialy a documantery programes,and i send much of my time chatting with my friends.i 'm talkative and i like to meet new pepole.i belive self confident is the important caractere i have.i want to be a succeed busneisswoman,so i want to study and work hard to have a expriences to do everythings very good and be good in my work,and i like to constructor a special family and be a very godd mother.
However, first, you need to look at your use of capital letters and punctuation.
1) Use a capital letter at the beginning of every sentence.
2) Put a space after every comma and every full stop.
3) Always capitalise the word "I".
Please write your paragraph again and post it here.