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    Arrow Please, translate THIS!

    Hello there from Bosnia...

    As you can see in my profile my first language is Bosnian. I do speak English but unfortunately not well enough.

    I need help of someone who is native English speaker.

    So, here is the text to translate (grammar check is needed). It is about thesis of friend of mine.



    In this thesis we have elaborated advantages of using personal PC as a simulator in industrial processes. To make PC represent more effective of the real process we have upgraded it with PCI-20000 instrumental system. With hardware configured like this user communicate with special software package LABTECH NOTEBOOK.

    Also, in thesis is shown that PC, PCI-20000 and LABTECH NOTEBOOK makes efficient simulation environment (process simulator) with who is possible to simulate larger amount of industrial processes.

    In first chapter is shown abilities of PCI-20000 instrumental system. In second chapter is shown abilities of LABTECH NOTEBOOK system as well as user manual. In third chapter is about making of concrete simulations in this type of simulation environment. In forth chapter it is shown how created simulations can be used in phase of design some sort of engineer solutions.



    Thanks a lot

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    Re: Please, translate THIS!

    elaborated advantages- elaborated on the advantages
    To make PC represent more effective of the real process- to make the PC represent the real process more effectively
    we have upgraded it with PCI-20000 instrumental- we have upgraded it with a/the PCI-20000 instrumental
    Also, in thesis is shown- Furthermore, the thesis shows that
    PC, PCI-20000 and LABTECH NOTEBOOK makes efficient- the PC..... make an efficient
    with who is possible- with which it is possible
    simulate larger amount- simulate more industrial...
    In first chapter- In the first (and with the other chapters) it is shown
    is shown abilities of LABTECH NOTEBOOK system as well as user manual- the capabilities of the Labtech Notebook system are shown, as well as the user manual
    In third chapter- The third (no 'in')
    making of concrete simulations- making concrete
    forth - the fourth
    can be used in phase of design some sort of engineer solutions.- can be used in the dsesign phase of some engineering solutions (It is not clear what you mean by 'some sort here)

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    Re: Please, translate THIS!

    PS- Instead of asking to translate, it's better to ask for someone to check- I nearly didn't answer as I thought I wouldn't be able to translate it.


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    Smile Re: Please, translate THIS!

    Well, thanks a lot dtol )... I will make some changes as you suggested. It will be fine enough because our professors do not speak English much better than we do!



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    Re: Please, translate THIS!

    You're welcome.

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