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    ANONIMITY
    The Central Hospital of Yichang
    Yichang, 443003, Hubei, China
    email address here
    1315-581-7718
    education
    2002-present JIANGXI UNIVERSITY OF FINANCE AND ECONOMICS JIANGXI, CHINA
     Major: International Business (ALL ENGLISH TEACHING), School of International Studies.
     Candidate for Bachelor in Economics in July 2006.
     Courses studied include Economics, Money and Banking, International Economics, International Trade Practice, International Trade Policies, International Settlement, International Business Law, International Taxation, International Business Communication, International Marketing, Business English Correspondence, Import and Export Operations.

    experience
    Jul. 2005-present JIANGXI TEXTILE GROUP IMPORT&EXPORT COMPANY JIANGXI, CHINA
    Subordinate to large state-owned group co. of Jiangxi province-Jiangxi Textile Group Company. It exports mainly the Knitting Garments and to over 30 countries and ares all over the world,
    Intern, Export/Import Assistant
     Introduced to foreign businessmen the products and company, and negotiated with them.
     Sampled and checked in factories some garments for quality, made records, and supervised the production process.
     Translated the Letter of Credit and measurement table; calculated products’ prices.
     Designed the Commercial Invoice and sales confirmaiton;prepared materials for customs clearance and negotiation; copied and faxed related materials.

    Sep. 2003-Jan. 2004 MARYKAY INC.(US COMPANY), NANCHANG BRANCH JIANGXI, CHINA
    Part-time Salesman
     Sold in English 3 sets of skin care for men to a foreign teacher.
     Introduced the company to customers, and got promoted to Senior Beauty Consultant for bring a new member in,
     Made an appointment with customers, taught customers skin care and color cosmetics in class, and had about 50 face-to-face classes in total.
     Joined for 8 times the company’s parties and salons; shared experiences and ideas with colleagues and teammates,
     Received once every half month regular trainings from the company, including product knowledge and communication and sales skills. Understood and sympathized with the foreign company’s thinking, values and culture.

    Sep. 2002-Sep. 2003 JIANGXI UNIVERSITY OF FINANCE AND ECONOMICS STUDENTS’ UNION JIANGXI, CHINA
    Assistant of Entertainment Department
     Participated in organising 3 theatical evenings and 1 singing competition. Allocated and equiped performers with microphones behind the scenes; prepared and evacuated stage props with teammates.
     Recruited over 40 students for a Latin Dance training class. Designed and posted posters, sent out handouts to students’ dormitories, and advised on Latin Dance.
     Participated in the whole registration process for “Campus Best 10 Singers Competition”
     Made up a dance together with teammtes within 2 days, and performed about 8 times on campus..

    Personal
     College English Test Level-Six, IELTS 6.0. ALL ENGLISH TEACHING OF UNIVERSITY COURSES, fluent in English listening, speaking, reading and writing. Frequently communicate with foreign teachers.
     Frequent user of Excel and PowerPoint
     Member of the dancing group of “Chu Feng Performing Association”. Over 2 years’ learning of Latin Dance. 2nd prize with partner in a dancing competitin.
     3rd prize in Female-800-Meter running competition in the sports meeting.
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    Default Re: Help with my resume:)

    1st comment- JIANGXI UNIVERSITY OF FINANCE AND ECONOMICS JIANGXI, CHINA-don't use upper case like this- use title case- Jianggxi University of Finance..... ( using capital letters is called 'shouting')
    education- this should have a capital letter at the beginning- it's a heading
    exports mainly the Knitting Garments and to over 30 countries and ares all over the world- mainly exports knitted garments to over 30 countries.
    Introduced to foreign businessmen the products and company- Introduced the company and products to foreign businessmen (no women?) maybe use business people
    Translated the Letter of Credit and measurement table;- just one letter or letters and tables?
    Designed the Commercial Invoice and sales confirmaiton- again singular?? + confirmation
    to a foreign teacher- doesn't sound very successful- foreign teachers, surely?
    for bring - for bringing
    Joined for 8 times the company’s parties and salons- Joined the company’s parties and salons 8 times
    Received once every half month regular trainings- Received regular trainging every fortnight
    evacuated stage props- dismantled

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    Default Re: Help with my resume:)

    Thank you Tdol, valuable advices

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    You're welcome. One more- don't use 'advice' in the plural.

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