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    what corrections does this Paragraph require,

    "I have to advise all the smarter people that wisdom requires Patience and tolerance of everything that has been said or done against you and seek solution to the problems that may arise as a repercussion".

    Please help me because I am going to include this Paragraph in my Class Assignment.

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    Quote Originally Posted by zaffar View Post
    what corrections does this Paragraph require,

    "I have to advise all the smarter people that wisdom requires patience and tolerance of everything that has been said or done against you, and that you seek a solution to the problems that may arise as a repercussion".

    Please help me because I am going to include this Paragraph in my Class Assignment.
    There's one fix. But please don't ask us to do your homework.

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    . . .and why are you only advising smarter people?

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    And that's a smart Question
    Actually I am giving my comments against a quote which explains that wisdom requires age growth and experience while smartness require no such things. A teenager can be smarter than an aged and experienced person.

    I hope that it satisfies your curiosity

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