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    Please check my letter

    You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expedition, which organize such trips. In your letter :
    - Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
    - State what your skills and experience are.
    - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
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    Dear Sir / Madam

    I am writing this letter to request for voluntary work in Angola. I graduated from university last year. I would like to use my academic knowledge for helping people in a developing country. In addition, it would be better if I could obtain work experiences by this job.

    Actually, I am a computer engineer and I was teaching computer courses during the studying in university, I have two years experience in this job and I am expert in computer software programming.

    As it is mentioned before, I would like to work in Angola because I have travelled to this country many times and I am familiar with its people and culture. I inform you that I am ready to work there for two years. I hope that I would be helpful for this job.

    I look forward to hearing from you,

    Yours faithfully,
    John Smith.

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    Re: Please check my letter

    Quote Originally Posted by akm2446 View Post
    You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expedition, which organize such trips. In your letter :



    - Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.


    - State what your skills and experience are.


    - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.


    ================================================== ===


    Dear Sir or Madam:




    I am writing this letter to request for voluntary work in Angola. I graduated from university last year. I would like to use my academic knowledge for helping to help people in a developing country. In addition, it would be better if I could obtain work experiences by this job. (Is this sentence really necessary?)




    Actually, I am a computer engineer and I was teaching computer courses during the studying my study in university. I have two years experience in this job and I am expert in computer software programming.




    As it is mentioned before, I would like to work in Angola because I have travelled to this country many times and I am familiar with its people and culture. (Where is it mentioned before?) I inform you that I am ready prepared to work there for two years. I hope that I would can be helpful in this endeavor and that you will consider my request.


    I look forward to hearing from you,




    Yours faithfully,


    John Smith.

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    akm2446 is offline Newbie
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    Re: Please check my letter

    thanks for your help.

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