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    Default A paragraph 3

    Does this paragraph requires correction(s),

    "Loving one another is not an easier task to do. It requires complete understanding of not only other people but also understanding of the surroundings. For loving one another we have to be considerate, thoughtful, sympathetic, appreciative and indulgent. On the other hand it is not as difficult as it seems because this feeling comes from within and it accepts no bondage, no set standards and no limits".

    Please make the corrections.

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    Default Re: A paragraph 3

    Quote Originally Posted by zaffar View Post
    Does this paragraph requires correction(s),

    "Loving one another is not an easy thing to do.
    I wouldn't call loving a task. But if you want to use task, leave off "to do". "Something or other is not an easy task."

    It requires complete understanding of not only other people but also understanding of the surroundings. For loving To love one another we have to be considerate, thoughtful, sympathetic, appreciative and indulgent. On the other hand it is not as difficult as it seems because this feeling comes from within and it accepts no bondage, no set standards and no limits".

    Please make the corrections.
    That's good.

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