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    mjirani1991 is offline Newbie
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    Default please correct my sentance

    my mother called me yesterday when i was drunk at my friends wedding she asked me where i am for some stupid reasons i told her i'm at my wedding . she started to swore at me and hanged up the phone . what am i going to do now ?

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    Default Re: please correct my sentance

    First, have another try yourself, using capital letters for the first word in each sentence and for the pronoun I.

    You need at least one extra full stop, and to change swore and hanged.

    One word needs an apostrophe of possession.

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    Default Re: please correct my sentance

    Quote Originally Posted by mjirani1991 View Post
    my mother called me yesterday when i was drunk at my friends wedding she asked me where i am for some stupid reasons i told her i'm at my wedding . she started to swore at me and hanged up the phone . what am i going to do now ?
    First, apologise to your mother. Then follow Rover KE's advice.

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    Default Re: please correct my sentance

    Quote Originally Posted by billmcd View Post
    First, apologise to your mother. Then follow Rover KE's advice.
    Alcoholics Anonymous.

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