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    a group who

    Can I use who instead of that?


    Subjects were divided into two groups. The first group who were accompanied by their friends showed higher physiological reactions to complete a task compared with the second group who took their pets with themselves.

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    Last edited by arzgol; 08-Aug-2011 at 02:50.

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    Re: a group who

    Quote Originally Posted by arzgol View Post
    Can I use who instead of that? Yes, but there are other things that need attention:

    Subjects were divided into two groups. The first group, who were accompanied by their friends, showed higher physiological reactions to complete a task compared with the second group, who took their pets with themselves.
    I don't know what you mean by the words I have underlined

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    Re: a group who

    Subjects were divided into two groups. The first group, who were accompanied by their friends, showed higher physiological reactions to complete a task compared with the second group, who took their pets with themselves.


    They had higher blood pressure, tachycardia when they had to do a complicated task when their friends were with them.


    I had to be concise, since the prepartion time is limited in the exam. Could you please fix my sentence to sound proper English.


    Thank you for your response.

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    Re: a group who

    Quote Originally Posted by arzgol View Post
    Subjects were divided into two groups. The first group, who were accompanied by their friends, showed higher physiological reactions to after completeing a task compared with the second group, who took their pets with themselves.
    I don't know if that is acceptable. I would prefer:
    The first group, who were accompanied by their friends, had higher blood pressure after completing a (complicated task) than the second group, who took their pets with them.

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