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    Please check my letter.

    Topic : You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:

    • Explain what you like about cafeteria
    • Say what is wrong
    • Suggest how it could be improved

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    Dear Sir/Madam

    I am writing this letter to make suggestion about college cafeteria. I eat my lunch in this cafeteria every day. It is one of my favorite places in college. Its staffs behave friendly and their hospitality is very great. They usually serve a wide range of foods with a good quality.

    On the other hand, the cafeteria has some weaknesses. I think that the cafeteria is not very sizable and there is a shortage in seats. Sometimes, people have to wait for a seat.


    I would like to mention a few suggestions for improving the cafeteria. First of All, I personally believe that the cafeteria needs more space and perhaps it would be a good idea to move the cafeteria to another place with adequate space. Secondly, it would be great if people could make a reservation by phone, they would not have to wait for a seat.

    I hope that my suggestions will be helpful,

    Yours faithfully,
    John Smith.


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    Re: Please check my letter.

    Dear Sir/Madam

    I am writing this letter to share some suggestion about college cafeteria. I eat my lunch in College cafeteria . It is one of my favorite place in college. Its staff behave friendly and their hospitality would be appreciated . They usually serve a number of foods with a good quality.

    On the other hand, the cafeteria has some draw backs . I think that the cafeteria has uncomfortable space so it causes problem at the time of lunch. Sometimes, students wait for vacant chairs.


    I would like to mention some suggestions for improving the cafeteria. First of All, I personally believe that the cafeteria needs more space and perhaps it would be a good idea to move the cafeteria to another place with adequate space. Secondly, it would be great if people could make a reservation by phone, they would not have to wait for a seat.

    I hope that my suggestions will be helpful,

    Yours faithfully,
    John Smith.

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    #3

    Re: Please check my letter.

    Dear I have drafted it please check it.
    I am also learner but I did my best
    thanks
    Regard
    Engr.Yasir Ali

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    Re: Please check my letter.

    thanks engr.yasir ali bhatti for your help

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