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    I am tyring to write a letter to accmodation officer at college by saying thank you for ther efrort, but I am not sure how to express then naturally. can you help me? THe folloiwngs are my suggestions.

    1. First, I would like to thank you for your service of accomodation and facilities.
    2. First, I would like to thank you for the efforts you have made to provide us quality accommodation and facilities.
    3. First, I woule like to thank you for providing us quality service for our safe and convenient living in the domitory.
    4. First, I would like to thank you for your efforts you have been making for the betterment of student dormitories and residences

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    Default Re: thank you for accommodation...

    None of these are very natural.

    What did this person do for you?
    Did she have to do something unusual to accommodate your special need?
    Did you ask more than the usual number of questions?
    Are you, without meaning to be, a rather difficult customer?

    Knowing this will help us write a better opening line.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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