Hey, I can probably help you edit your paper, but it's kind of annoying to do it on here. It is not easy to put in things like comments in this box, but I want to add them so that you can understand anything I change! I think this will help you improve your English :D.
It would be best if you could attach your paper on this site (.doc or .docx format) because it's easier to edit. If that's too much work, I can probably help you edit it on here too.