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    #1

    Which one is better?

    Dear teacher,

    Would you please show me which one is better..

    1. Proposal letter of Tender Best Final Price
    or Proposal of the best final tender price

    2. W
    e would like to confirm the revised items as your request and offer our best price.
    or We would like to confirm that we will revise items as your request and offer our best price.


    Thank you so much for your help.

    Best Regards,
    Suka


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    #2

    Re: Which one is better?

    Quote Originally Posted by ngocha View Post
    Dear teacher,

    Would you please show me which one is better..

    1. Proposal letter of Tender Best Final Price
    or Proposal of the best final tender price

    2. W
    e would like to confirm the revised items as your request and offer our best price.
    or We would like to confirm that we will revise items as your request and offer our best price.


    Thank you so much for your help.

    Best Regards,
    Suka
    Neither is very clear. #2 could be like this: "We would like to confirm that we will revise the items as you requested, and will offer our best price".

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    #3

    Re: Which one is better?

    Hi Ngoc Ha,

    I’m not a teacher.

    You can use the second sentence: Proposal of the best final tender price
    in the Bidding Document
    (Chac Ha hoi de lam Ho so thau! Co the yen tam ve cau nay!)

    Bye!

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