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    Smile How can you paraphrase these sentences?

    1. These notes will be invaluable in your preparation for future interviews.

    2. The hotter the temperature, the more colors shift from red to yellow to white to blue.

    3. Research suggest that laughter maybe a buffer against heart attacks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by pinkay_0001 View Post
    1. These notes will be invaluable in your preparation for future interviews.

    2. The hotter the temperature, the more colors shift from red to yellow to white to blue.

    3. Research suggest that laughter maybe a buffer against heart attacks.
    Is this homework? (#2 doesn't make much sense).

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    Default Re: How can you paraphrase these sentences?

    Why do you want them paraphrased? They seem fine to me, except that 'maybe' in #3 should be two words.

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    Default Re: How can you paraphrase these sentences?

    No its not. Its the question from my past exams. I would just like to confirm if what I've answered is correct or not.

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    Default Re: How can you paraphrase these sentences?

    Anything sir. I would just like to clarify things out. :)

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    Default Re: How can you paraphrase these sentences?

    Hi,

    I would rewrite number 3 in the following way:

    3. Research suggests that laughter maybe a buffer against heart attacks.

    I have underlined the two changes that I would make.

    I have a blog that gives tips on spelling, grammar and writing so check it out if you want to improve further.

    Kathleen

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    Default Re: How can you paraphrase these sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by fivejedjon View Post
    Why do you want them paraphrased? They seem fine to me, except that 'maybe' in #3 should be two words.
    Can you help me sir?

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    Default Re: How can you paraphrase these sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by Kathleen Shuster View Post
    Hi,

    I would rewrite number 3 in the following way:

    3. Research suggests that laughter maybe a buffer against heart attacks.

    I have underlined the two changes that I would make.

    I have a blog that gives tips on spelling, grammar and writing so check it out if you want to improve further.

    Kathleen

    I think what you have made is not paraphrasing.

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    Default Re: How can you paraphrase these sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by Kathleen Shuster View Post
    I have a blog that gives tips on spelling, grammar and writing so check it out if you want to improve further.
    Most of us answer a couple of dozen questions or more before we start promoting our own sites.

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