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    JoeGuerrero is offline Newbie
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    Please, Check my letter

    Please I need to someone help me checking the grammar and redaction of the following text and give me your comments.
    "Find the partner that you are looking of the most direct way.
    Consulting to the artisanal, small and medium-scale mining.
    Trading of zinc, copper and lead, iron ore and manganese ore, molybdenum, antimonium.
    Structuring and promotion of mining projects which need investment.
    Link directly the buyer and / or investor with the desired producer or project by shortening the negotiation process and making it safe."
    Thanks for your answer.
    Joe

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    Josiah7 is offline Newbie
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    Re: Please, Check my letter

    I got some suggestions for your text.

    "Find the right partner for your business.
    Provides consultation to the artisanal, and small to medium-scale mining.
    Trades in zinc, copper and lead, iron ore and manganese ore, molybdenum, antimonium.
    Structures and promotes mining projects seeking investments.
    Links the buyer and / or investor directly with the desired producer or project to shorten the negotiation process and increases security."

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