"One can’t help but to think what people have been worried about is slowly turning into a reality after hearing about the survey conducted by the Supreme Court that divorce rate among the newly wedded couples is soaring on top of having the highest divorce rate in the world."
What people have been worried about is slowly turning into reality - the survey conducted by the Supremem Court revealed that the divorce rate among the newly wedded couples have surpassed the highest recorded divorce rate in the world.
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