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    The lawyer for the defense charged that she suspected the police of having illegally taped her confidential conversations with her client and then used the information obtained to find evidence supporting their murder charges.

    Correct the highlighted text.

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    Default Re: Senetnce Correction

    What do you think it should be?

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    Default Re: Senetnce Correction

    Quote Originally Posted by AnshulChauhan View Post
    Correct the highlighted text.
    The word 'please' helps sometimes.

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    Quote Originally Posted by fivejedjon View Post
    The word 'please' helps sometimes.

    AnshulChauhan...in Hindi...means "please".

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    Default Re: Senetnce Correction

    then used the information obtained to find evidence supporting their murder charges.

    then used the information gathered from unlawful search and seizures to bolster ill-gotten evidence supporting their murder charges. How dat?

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