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    mateuszek is offline Newbie
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    Can you check this sentences?

    I'm writing a letter and I need help:

    - I am a third-year student at Maritime University in the Faculty of Marine Engineering.
    - Since February I intend to start practical training on the ship.
    - I had already two practical training as an engineer cadet on the school ships
    - I am a person who works well as a team member. I am very ambitious, organized, and willing to learn.
    - My knowledge of English is good at the level of communicative and technical.
    - I am very interested in working for your firm. I would love to work permanently in your company in the future.
    - Thank you very much for your time an consideration.

    Please, help me :)

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    Re: Can you check this sentences?

    This is what I wrote:

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    My name is XXX. I was born XXX. I am a third-year student at XXX Maritime University in the Faculty of Marine Engineering. My specialization is Marine Propulsion Plant and Offshore Construction Operation.
    Since February/March 2012 I intend to start practice on the ship.
    I had already two practical training as an engineer cadet on the school ships:
    - XXX ( one month)
    - XXX (one month)
    I am a person who works well as a team member. I am very ambitious, organized, and willing to learn. My knowledge of English is good at the level of communicative and technical.
    I am very interested in working for your firm. I would love to work permanently in your company in the future.
    Thank you very much for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
    -----
    It's not a typical cover letter. I heard that in this industry companies prefer letters like this.
    "practical training" I took from page of my school :)
    I don't know how write about english (I can communicate and I know technical words ).
    And I'd like to say that I want work for them in the future (now I'll go to the practice). It's very important.

    Do you have any ideas and advices? :)

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