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    I need HELP with a cover letter

    Dear Sir or Madam
    I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to the Economics and Management program at the University of London. I completed my Degree in Biochemistry from the Autonomous University of Barcelona in 2004 completing my training with an online Master in Quality, Safety and environment. I work currently as Plant Quality manager in a Baby Food company in Barcelona with partners and customers in Europe, America, and Asia.

    Biochemistry is a scientific and technical degree but, as a Plant Quality manager, I have gained valuable experience managing technical projects, industrial processes, and manufacturing. But industrial plant itís only a part of the company, and I want to continue learning and understand how organizations work and how they interact.

    I am extremely interested in obtaining a position at the University of London, as its programs have an excellent reputation that is known worldwide. Itís not my first distance learning experience and Iím sure I will success.
    Thank you for considering my application

    Sincerely yours

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    Re: I need HELP with a cover letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Sparafucile View Post
    Dear Sir or Madam
    I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to the Economics and Management program at the University of London. I completed my Degree in Biochemistry from the Autonomous University of Barcelona in 2004 completing my training with an online Master in Quality, Safety and environment. I work currently as Plant Quality manager in a Baby Food company in Barcelona with partners and customers in Europe, America, and Asia.

    Biochemistry is a scientific and technical degree but, as a Plant Quality manager, I have gained valuable experience managing technical projects, industrial processes, and manufacturing. But the industrial plant itís is only a part of the company, and I want to continue to learning and understand how organizations work and how they interact.

    I am extremely interested in obtaining a position at the University of London, as its programs have an excellent reputation that is known worldwide. Itís not my first distance learning experience and Iím sure I will succeed.
    Thank you for considering my application

    Sincerely yours
    Nice work. A few minor changes.

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    Re: I need HELP with a cover letter

    Thanks!!!


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