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    please help me with this sentence

    "I find Gastroenterology appealing, as it allows for complete and thorough patient care, as well as ample opportunities for research."

    Can some one correct the grammar and make it sound better?
    thanks in advance

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    Re: please help me with this sentence

    You could say 'Gatroenterolgoy appeals to me...'

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