[Grammar] the role of technology

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rainous

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The role of technology is to become a vehicle on which services can be provided.

Does the underlined part sound OK in the sentence? It sounds a bit wordy to me.

or would there be a better way to phrase it?

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How about platform?
 

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The role of technology is to become a vehicle on which services can be provided.

Does the underlined part sound OK in the sentence? It sounds a bit wordy to me.

or would there be a better way to phrase it?

Thank you.

I agree that platform would be better.

The role of technology is to be a platform from which services can be provided.
 
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