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    Default Need Help On Grammar

    Hi admins :) I'm sorry I post this thread again. Is it okay if we post it here instead of the Poetry forum/channel? Because I really need help on the grammar and it's quite urgent actually.

    I wrote this but maybe there are grammatical mistakes somewhere. Please help...

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    Default Re: Need Help On Grammar

    Grammatically it's mostly OK, with poetic licence accounting for any problems.

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