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[tomasz]

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I found myself in a strange city which seemed deserted and dead. I walked along a wide and gloomy avenue. I was surrounded by majestic buildings, which casted a dead unnatural shadows heightened mood o horror and mystery. Disturbing the maze of paths seemed to have no exit. At the end I came to the large square, around which stretched rows of arcades. In the middle rose a mystical statue, depicting unrealistic figure. The fronts of buildings lay motionless clocks constantly pointing south. Dead silence meant that I could hear my own heart beating. Suddenly crazy clocks tips spun in the wrong direction the earth schnook and I heard a shrill noise. Among the buildings went spending locomotive surrounded by clouds o smoke. She passed me raising clouds of dust into the air and entered in the clearance between the arcades. After that there was dead and silence again. I stood amazed and speechless with fear. I had the impression that I will get insane. I wake up. It was just s nightmare. Feeling a great relief I got up and looked around me. I was in a strange city.


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[Raymott]

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