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    Hi,

    "Why are u so hold back? I just want to kiss you"


    Thanks

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    Why are you holding back? I just want to kiss you.

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    Why are you resisting me? I just want to kiss you.

    Can we possibly say "Why are you holding back?" ?

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    Default Re: Please correct to make it sound better

    Quote Originally Posted by Bennevis View Post
    Why are you resisting me? I just want to kiss you.

    Can we possibly say "Why are you holding back?" ?
    Yes, we can.

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    Default Re: Please correct to make it sound better

    Quote Originally Posted by TheShadow View Post
    Hi,

    "Why are u so hold back? I just want to kiss you"


    Thanks
    REMINDER: NOT A TEACHER


    Tom: How about a little kiss?

    Mona: No way! This is our first date. I'm a good girl.

    Tom: Aw, c'mon. Don't be so uptight. All I'm asking for is a little

    kiss, sweetie pie.

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