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    could you possibly find out my essay's errors

    Hello guys
    I'm new member here and I'm happy cz i'm I'm among English speakers.
    well I've written admission essay which is one the important requirement documents in order to complete your admission
    i know there are many mistakes and errors such as : grammatically mistakes , some paragraphs are not connecting and supporting each other i mean by that there are some paragraphs that i think placed wrongly. I will be thankful if u note some points here .

    in order to get information about what i'm writing this essay, i'll write what they wrote in their website about this essay and what should be consisted :
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    this taken from the university site 

    Essay
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    An essay is a required element of the application form.  The essay gives applicants the opportunity to present their uniquenessspecial skills, and challenges they may have faced, or anything else they want us to know about themApplicants can state why they are interested to study engineering and why they have chosen Texas A&M at Qatar
    with my very best wishes for u
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    the essay is attached because it's two pages and this box doesn't support that so i said it's better to attach it.

    Regards
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    Re: could you possibly find out my essay's errors

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    Re: could you possibly find out my essay's errors

    I have to back up what Gil just said. I never open files that are linked. If you can paste it into a post, you'll have more people take a look.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: could you possibly find out my essay's errors

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    Re: could you possibly find out my essay's errors

    i did what u say
    but no respond

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