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    lie,Mostly everyone lie once in their entire life. I don't like whom are too much lie. someone habit is like daily routine. Its make difficult for other as well or sometime its create big problem. while you lie something and you feel it will open or they will know what you lie and you make more excuses as well so one mistake make you more. you will keep on doing again and again.

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    Default Re: is this correct

    Quote Originally Posted by urmilashahi View Post
    lie,
    You can't start a sentence or paragraph this way
    Mostly everyone lie once in their entire life.
    Almost everyone lies once in their life. (This isn't true)
    I don't like whom are too much lie.
    I don't like people who lie too much.
    someone habit is like daily routine.
    Someone's habit is like a daily routine.
    Its make difficult for other as well or sometime its create big problem.
    It causes difficulty for others as well, and sometimes creates a big problem.
    while you lie something and you feel it will open or they will know what you lie and you make more excuses as well so one mistake make you more.
    When you lie about something and ...?
    you will keep on doing it again and again.
    You probably shouldn't be posting something of this complexity without revising it first. Sure, we could fix all your subject-verb agreement problems, etc. but so could you.
    Are you studying any grammar?

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