liust0819
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- Sep 25, 2011
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- Student or Learner
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- Chinese
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- China
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- China
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These days, students are obessed with their assignments, they don't finish their homework, and they should bring their homework back home. While students should grow up as a well-rounded person. So I hold the notion that the university should bless their students with different kinds of sports activities.
The first reason is that by doing some sports activities, students can improve their health condition. Teachers always care about students' result, they can only see their students through the eyes of a supervisor. There is an increasing number of teachers ignore students' health, but now, students' health becomes a problem. Only when the students possess a strong body, they could study well. My sister always feels sick, her school doesn't give enough money to support their students' sports activities, she studies all day long, which creates her health problem, day by day, she doesn't study as well as before. Carrying out the sports activities will not improve the students’ health thoroughly, while students should do some exercises after classes.
Also, I consider that it’s a good way for students to make friends in the sports activities. We can make friends of all different races and backgrounds. Personally, I have known Mike in a tennis activity last year, we both like playing tennis, but I play better than Mike do. From that time, we keep in touch with each other, I teacher him how to play, soon we become best friends. When I'm in difficulty, he' ll be just a phone-call away to get me out of trouble. Especially, once I forgot to take my lunch box, Mike gave me his immediately, which makes me very moving. We usually play together, and study together, we both make a big progress this year. So that’s why I agree that.
I strongly believe the university should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities and not merely focus on studying. There's a saying goes, "All work and no play make Jack a dull boy". By doing this, the whole students can not only obtain the result, but also have a strong body, meanwhile, the school will get a good reputation.
These days, students are obessed with their assignments, they don't finish their homework, and they should bring their homework back home. While students should grow up as a well-rounded person. So I hold the notion that the university should bless their students with different kinds of sports activities.
The first reason is that by doing some sports activities, students can improve their health condition. Teachers always care about students' result, they can only see their students through the eyes of a supervisor. There is an increasing number of teachers ignore students' health, but now, students' health becomes a problem. Only when the students possess a strong body, they could study well. My sister always feels sick, her school doesn't give enough money to support their students' sports activities, she studies all day long, which creates her health problem, day by day, she doesn't study as well as before. Carrying out the sports activities will not improve the students’ health thoroughly, while students should do some exercises after classes.
Also, I consider that it’s a good way for students to make friends in the sports activities. We can make friends of all different races and backgrounds. Personally, I have known Mike in a tennis activity last year, we both like playing tennis, but I play better than Mike do. From that time, we keep in touch with each other, I teacher him how to play, soon we become best friends. When I'm in difficulty, he' ll be just a phone-call away to get me out of trouble. Especially, once I forgot to take my lunch box, Mike gave me his immediately, which makes me very moving. We usually play together, and study together, we both make a big progress this year. So that’s why I agree that.
I strongly believe the university should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities and not merely focus on studying. There's a saying goes, "All work and no play make Jack a dull boy". By doing this, the whole students can not only obtain the result, but also have a strong body, meanwhile, the school will get a good reputation.