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Thanks for your time, assistance and opinion from Dr. P H on the bases of MRI of my brother in law. Shaikh has informed us after the consultation of his family doctor whether the operation is suitable in Canada or India . I will let you know when I get the info. from Canada
See my version above. I have put in the red the most important changes but there are some others. Please read it carefully in comparison with your original.