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    Default Ani And Ami

    Please check the grammrtical error from these two paragraphs.

    Ros and Ami are best friends. They study in the same school and stick together through thick and thin. They both love cats and have two pets named Ca and Mi. They always take good care of their cats and always bring them for short walks in the evening.
    One evening, as they were strolling around their neighbourhood, Ros decided to take a rest
    under a big shady tree as the weather was scorching hot and she was drenched in sweat. Ami too joined Ros. While they were busy chatting innecessantly, they heard a loud chirping noise from above.

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    Default Re: Ani And Ami

    Quote Originally Posted by elly1013 View Post
    Please check the grammrtical error from these two paragraphs for grammatical errors.

    Ros and Ami are best friends. They study in at (or you can use "They go to) the same school and stick together through thick and thin. They both love cats and have two pets named Ca and Mi (they each have two cats? Four cats in total?). They always take good care of their cats and always bring take them for short walks in the every evening.
    One evening, as they were strolling around their neighbourhood, Ros decided to take a rest under a big shady tree as the weather because it was scorching hot and she was drenched in sweat. Ami too joined Ros. While they were busy chatting incecessantly, they heard a loud chirping noise from above.
    See above. If you have any queries about my amendments, please ask.
    Incidentally, your title is "Ani and Ami" but your story is about "Ros and Ami".

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