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Wait. You really need to paraphrase you sentences. I'll try to fix them but not to paraphrase:
1:We went to Egypt in the summer. We had a reservation in the Heloton Hotel. We were frequent guests there. We had family suite,which was an non smokig suite with three queen size bad. It costs us 5000sr included breakfast and lunch. We were in the reservation called bellman to carry our bags to the rooms. We had fourth floor room number 50 with balcony. Heloton Hotel is more beautiful than other Hotels, but more expensive.
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paragraph 2: We wanted to go to the store to buy some gifts. I was going in there. It was the first time I was going to the market. I did not know anything about the market .Later I met a sales person and asked him for gifts department. The sales person helped me to find that place. Also, I asked him for flashing it. I bought gifts, I wanted to give them to my sister. She took my gifts. She was very happy.
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